Hello, teacher Allan.

I really appreciate on your kind and detailed comment on my final assignment, but I'm just wondering about your way of removing marks.
First, I will attach a part of your comment.
"4 more marks were removed because it would have been better if you had created a proper reading stage, created a better production stage, and attached some visual examples."
In this, you mentioned the reasons of removing marks in 3 different areas (that is, lacking in reading stage, production stage, and attaching visual examples).
Thank you for reading.