[Business Translation (Advanced - ITT Level 1,2)] Regarding Midterm Result
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Name JINKYEONG LEE Date21-02-07 04:01 View2,432 Comment2Content
I have just got my result for the midterm exam. Overall, the score I've got was better than expected. Therefore, I would like to clarify the translation on Question number 9.
I certainly understand that I am not supposed to expose the actual answers and questions. I wanted to understand further on the part marked down due to awkward translation.
1. Kindly advise how I can rephrase the sentences rather than the modeled answer.
>>If I use the verbiage ' Those who did not see an immediate effect' or ' Those who have a serious problem', is that acceptable?
2. I guess it could be " 즉각적 효과를 못 본 이들" rather than "심각한 문제를 가진 이들" in Korean.
Await your reply
Best Regards,
Blaire
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Hello Blaire!
Great work and I hope you understand that I am not answering in details. I would love to discuss more about this in the future.
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1. Kindly advise how I can rephrase the sentences rather than the modeled answer.
>>If I use the verbiage ' Those who did not see an immediate effect' or ' Those who have a serious problem', is that acceptable?
-> So, both are acceptable and in fact, your answer is also acceptable. The problem with your answer was the part that I bolded rather. I can further clarify when we talk if you have more questions.
2. I guess it could be " 즉각적 효과를 못 본 이들" rather than "심각한 문제를 가진 이들" in Korean.
-> I agree with you. I think the answer could have been translated better in my opinion.
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I hope my answers helped.
- Mason (Instructor)
