Hello Heejeong!

Here are my answers to your great questions!

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1-1: 1. 이번 주말에 건물을 완벽하게 보호할 수 있도록 모든 출입구를 철저히 점검하세요.
I understood your explanation that it has to be 'check - secure - protected' if I want to use verb 'check'.
I only used check and secure to translate and would like to ask you if my translation is also good or still needs to be corrected to deliver the meaning.



-> I think your translation is accurate and complete.



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1-1: 3. 기상 조건이 지난 2주보다는 많이 좋아지겠지만 홍수위험은 여전히 남아있다.
The weather condition <-> weather
might be a lot better <-> will be much better
flood risk <-> the risk of flood
The underlined words were your answers and I would like to ask your feedback about my translation.
I wasn't sure about the difference between those two words.

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- The weather condition <-> weather
: I wouldn’t say there’s much difference in this context. Saying “weather condition” would be fine as well.

- might be a lot better <-> will be much better

: I am not entirely sure if I would use “might be” in this case, because ‘might be’ doesn’t feel very strong to me. In my opinion, the sentence is supposing that the weather will get better.


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flood risk <-> the risk of flood

->  I wouldn’t say flood risk is wrong, but I believe “risk of 자연재해” is a lot more common.


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1-1: 19. 개인정보 측면에서 보면 ~
Is it possible to use 'in terms of personal information'?


-> Yes it is!

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1-3: 그 여자가 입고 있는 명품이 다 진짜일까?
Instead of 'real', canI use 'genuine' or 'authentic'?


-> ‘Authentic’ is a common word when we are talking about 명품 vs 가품/짝퉁!

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I hope this helps!

Best regards,

Mason U, CMI-Korean
Business Interpretation and Translation in Korean (BIT-K) Instructor