[Online TESOL] your comment on my final test
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Name Jeong Hyun Ryu Date17-06-11 18:23 View3,134 Comment1Content
Hi Allan, this is Jeong Hyun.
Thank you for your comment and advice on my summary of the lesson plan in the final test.
I just wonder what you mean by "I could have organized it a bit more efficiently."
Do you mean, it would be better if I placed the activities in the different stage? or the order of the stage could have been different?
Or type of the activities could have had some more variety?
I just want to make sure what you meant before submitting the final assignment and see if I should make some change or improvement.
If you give me some detailed explanation, it will be very helpful for editing my final assignment.
Please reply me.
Thanks.
Thank you for your comment and advice on my summary of the lesson plan in the final test.
I just wonder what you mean by "I could have organized it a bit more efficiently."
Do you mean, it would be better if I placed the activities in the different stage? or the order of the stage could have been different?
Or type of the activities could have had some more variety?
I just want to make sure what you meant before submitting the final assignment and see if I should make some change or improvement.
If you give me some detailed explanation, it will be very helpful for editing my final assignment.
Please reply me.
Thanks.
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Hi Jeong Hyun,
I can't really remember your final answer right now, but if I recall correctly I think it was about two minor things. Firstly, your answer on the final test would have looked better if you had separated your stages into separate paragraphs. This is not a big deal, but it looks better (aesthetically). Secondly, I think it was about the order of your stages, but I can't remember clearly right now.
As far as your final assignment is concerned, just make sure that your stages are in a logical order, and look neat! Good luck!